Hi everyone,
As i am revising the draft of my project plan, i have earlier stated my problem that students use technology for 'Fun'. along with it i am adding more information on it that is some of the teachers assigned some creative writing but they just download it from the internet and paste it whereas some of the students task is done by their parents doing the same . Similarly, they just spend time searching unnecessary things in internet even in their computer classes.
Mandi
As i am revising the draft of my project plan, i have earlier stated my problem that students use technology for 'Fun'. along with it i am adding more information on it that is some of the teachers assigned some creative writing but they just download it from the internet and paste it whereas some of the students task is done by their parents doing the same . Similarly, they just spend time searching unnecessary things in internet even in their computer classes.
Mandi
Mandi,
ReplyDeleteI think that is not a change but adding some ideas. And being your peer I like the way you have added the idea to make your plan more visible to the reader. All the best with your plan.
Aadesh.